Whiskey

The effects of Whiskey

Hi! My name is WHISKEY
You thought you were drinking a sophisticated brand of me

Fooled you though I am your old friend RUM
I see you have not forgotten me I am still your chum

You and your friends can’t wait to visit with me in town
Waiting for the weekend to drink me up and get drunk

Blood shot eyes not looking very pretty
I come in many shapes and sizes looking very spiffy
At the end of the day I will have you acting very raunchy

Your inhibitions you will loose
Your morals you cannot choose

Look around you see that bum?
At the end of a few he will become your CHUM!

When I get through with you your spine will quiver
Your bowels will be like a river
Your bladder will spew out like ground up liver!

They call me WHISKEY
You are still in love with me I see

You pay a high price for me your good ole CHUM
You see my name is really RUM!

Written by: Marcia Balthazar (5/29/12)

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topflighttrini. says ... on Saturday, Apr 13 at 8:19 PM

I went home to Trinidad for Christmas an the song 5yr old boys&girls was singing go like this I want my rum in the morning an evening. ?????? fix that. before u bad talk my double dog ok.lol.

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Anonymous says ... on Sunday, Sep 9 at 8:28 PM

Sorry, not Trinidadians only, people throughout the world abuse alcohol.

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biche says ... on Tuesday, Jul 31 at 8:51 AM

drinking is ok once done in moderation. I LOVE IT!!!!!

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David Castellano says ... on Monday, Jul 23 at 11:18 AM

Trinidadians abuse liquor. The way we drink is not the way alcohol should be drunk, to us we equate getting drunk as having a good time withouth realizing the severe damage that alcohol is having on our bodies.

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solange griffith says ... on Sunday, Jun 10 at 3:18 PM

it tastes great. i always enjoys it, but it a little to expensive

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beerbelly says ... on Friday, Jun 8 at 12:52 AM

I love drinking....

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